I chose this piece of writing for my Work of the Week because I wrote it very descriptively and usedb heaps of verbs.

I  creapt into the room as if nobody can hear me. I slowly streched my arm out to the other side of the computer chair to pull the black leaver to make the blue cotton computer seat go upwards. So I pull the leaver and it goes slowly,then getting annoyed  I tugged it fast so it would go up faster. I made it go as high as it could so I could push off and it would spin. while that is spinning I pulled the leaver slowly,to make it turn in a anti -clockwise motion. The commentator yells out” And Garth Tander has won the race in a holden”. The volume startsto raise the T.V goes up voices go down. Mum waits for the results. The TV yells out”And the winner of the 2009 of bathurst is . . .